Heart crushed
Feeling flushed
Trying to get you out of my mind
Broken-hearted
Having parted
Dreams of you and me intertwined
Silent weeping
Sorrow creeping
You need to learn to leave me behind…
Heart pounding in anticipation
Looking around to find you
Losing every last sensation
Saving seats for two
Searching for your emanation
Our plans did not fall through
Fill my soul with lasting elation
When I finally find you…
These days are just not going right
Losing my sense of where and when
He’s the one now losing the fight
But don’t know what will happen then
Holding on with all my might
Feelings no longer kept within
Needed to tell you tonight was the night
That I fell for you over again…
Sorry, no picture, no song, no video. This one is purely me…
5 Comments
July 31, 2008 at 2:57 am
Wow! This stuff is deep. It’s interesting. It’s alluring. It’s captivating.
That’s pretty much all the words I can think of right now. XO Well
anyway, I’m sorry if things aren’t making sense now. It’s not making
much sense to me either, I’m still figuring out things and how I’m going
to deal with whatever the hell I’m going through. It’s like almost “tree”.
Can’t sleep. I miss my daddy. That was random. Well anyway, I’m in
a contemplative mood so I’m going to TRY and poem some stuff up.
Talk to You Later. <33
EmilyUnknown
August 1, 2008 at 11:42 pm
Gorgeous gorgeous poem, Travis. I love the name : )
/me says it, just because it sounds so beautiful
/me says it again
/me sighs
And nicely done with the rhyme scheme. You make the rhyming work and sound natural at the same time. I never manage to get that right properly.
Hm. Where are you anyways, dude? Haven’t seen you for ages. Okay, maybe ’seen’ isn’t exactly the right word. But whatever, you catch my drift.
/me shrugs
See you around some time
August 22, 2008 at 7:31 pm
I have one word to say,” WOW…”
September 4, 2008 at 9:00 am
I love this poem. Absolutely.
I just wondered, considering the title.
You ever heard the song ‘Fall for You’ by Secondhand Serenade? It’s my absolute favorite song at the moment.
Anyway, I’ll say it again: I love this poem. It’s perfect.
March 7, 2009 at 11:56 am
sounds like quite the internal struggle.
loved it!!
its beautifully raw~