July 6, 2008...11:20 pm

Sick

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I found this single stanza poem online and decided to add a stanza.  So I only made the second stanza, duh. 

 

Sick of trying

tired of trying

Yea, Im smiling

But inside im dying

 

Your love was implying

My love was undying

Sick of your lying

My love your denying

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  • Simplicity I find always conveys the things you want to say. Here simplicity has become complex. For what is more simple than loving someone and yet I can’t think of anything more complex.

    ‘Yeah, I’m smiling
    But inside I’m dying’

    Find me someone who can not relate to that line, find me someone who hasn’t hiden behind that smile.

    I love it. Simply.


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